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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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I was born and raised in Los Angeles Ca. and I have been leaving in for about 5 years now. I love to draw and read about remedies books because one day I plan on becoming a dermatologist, but first I plan on becoming a teacher. I have been taking child development for three years now and I also teach some of the children’s at church on Sunday. Another of my goals is to become a social worker the reason is because,

when I was a little girl I was put into foster home for three months when I was only five years old and my foster mother would insult me and hit me for the tree months she did not like me I don’t know why but ever since then I have been interested in children.
Every year thousands of children are put into foster care were most are abused physically, emotional and sexually. Department of Research at the New York University School of Social Work, determined that over 28 per cent of the children in state care had been abused while in the system. the system is flooded with so many children that don’t even need to be in care that these abuses continue to mount.
  

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