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Guptavandy Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Causes replaced with leads to

In the following sentence, should 'causes' be replaced with 'leads to', or we can also use 'cause' in this sense?

This might be the consequence of higher employee commitment pursued with this strategy, what causes, subsequently, long-term customer relationship.
  

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causes, subsequently, long-term ... can be replaced thus: leads, subsequently, to long-term ... ______ But the entire sentence is anomalous and should be reworked.

  • causes, subsequently, long-term ...
  • can be replaced thus: leads, subsequently, to long-term ...
  • ______ But the entire sentence is anomalous and should be reworked.
  • CJ
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causes, subsequently, long-term ...

can be replaced thus:

leads, subsequently, to long-term ...

______

But the entire sentence is anomalous and should be reworked.

CJ

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