Cause and solution based essays ielts writing task 2

In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing.

What do you think are the main causes reasons of crime?

How can we deal with those causes?

In recent years, there has been a significant increase in the number of criminal offences. In my opinion, I believe that the root cause of this predicament is lack of employment opportunities, poverty and education in myriads of countries. The viable solution in order to cope up with this plight are better planning of economic budget, introduction of job opportunities and government awareness program.

To begin with, the unemployed and uneducated masses are the main reason behind criminal activities. These people are urged to get them indulge in wrongful deception activities such as pilfering, robbery, burglary,stealing and even more dangerous acts. In other words, criminals are to prone to involve in getting innocent people's injured,murdered and abductions. This happens, particularly, as a result of frustration. The possible reason behind this mental anguish is that many people live hand to mouth and even not able to meet the basic needs of families. Consequently, such people are left with no other choice because being the impoverish part of nation they cannot tackle the soaring prices and inflation. A few recent investigations in Pakistan revealed that 80% of criminal profiles belong to people of lower class families.

The most practical solution to this problem are government- sponsored awareness campaign and introduction of government employment by better budget planning. Firstly, an effective awareness advertising campaign could warn the dangers and negative ramifications of barbaric and ruthless act of murders and kidnappings such as death penalties and first sentenced prisons and hopefully, raise awareness amongst public. The raised awareness could lead many people dismaying and appalling because of punishments. For example UK recently lobbied their citizens and this resulted in dramatic decrease in crime rates. Moreover, if government could better plan out their budget and this will be favourable and advantageous for needy people.

In conclusion, the major issues of increasing crime rates are poorly conditions of people and joblessness and the state should curtail this by promoting awareness and paying heed to budget planning improvement.