hi.
i'm designing fitness apparel.
i'd like to put "raise your life performance." as catchphrase under my brand name.
does this catchphrase sound ok for native speakers?
i want to use a different way of "make your lifestyle rich".
in my country, "rich" might be seen making a great deal of money, not just plentiful quantities.
anonymous does this catchphrase sound ok for native speakers? It is OK. The grammar is a bit askew, but that is a good thing in slogans like this because it captures attention; "life" as an adjective is unusual, but it is not incorrect.
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anonymousdoes this catchphrase sound ok for native speakers?
It is OK. The grammar is a bit askew, but that is a good thing in slogans like this because it captures attention; "life" as an adjective is unusual, but it is not incorrect.
anonymousi want to use a different way of "make your lifestyle rich".
It is not
anonymousi'm designing fitness apparel.i'd like to put "raise your life performance." as catchphrase under my brand name.does this catchphrase sound ok for native speakers?
It falls flat for me. It has no "ring" to it. It is too long for a catch phrase.
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