Catching cold

The following three paragraphs of the same topic written by different students have been revised by me. Please give me correction. Thanks a lot.

(1)
When Janice was on her way home yesterday afternoon, she got caught in a heavy shower. She didn’t take an umbrella with her, so she had to run home in the rain. When she got home, she was drenched to the skin. In the evening, she was aware that she caught a cold and had a fever. Later, her mother took her to a clinic. The doctor told her to take some medicine, get sufficient sleep, take sick leave until she got well.

(2)
When Janice was on the way home yesterday, it suddenly poured with rain. She didn’t bring her umbrella with her, so she had to brave the rain to run home as fast as she could. She was ended up soaked to the skin when she got home. Afterwards, she caught a cold and had a fever. Her mother was worried about her, so she took her to see a doctor. The doctor told her to take some medicine, get enough sleep, and take sick leave until she got well.

(3)
It rained heavily when Janice was on her way home yesterday. She didn't bring umbrella with her, so she just ran as faster as she could. When she arrived at home, she was terrible wet, she didn't change out of those damp clothes into something dry immediately, so she caught a cold. Later on, she had a sore throat and got a fever. Her mother took her to the doctor. The doctor told her to take medicine three times a day, take enough rest, take sick leave until she recovered from her bad cold.