This is a really story I saw it before some monthes
when i was going th restaurant to bring lunch , before i stop in parking see two cats play together , one of them black , other is brown after bring car to paking , and go to restaurant i wait the road to be empty before i pass it and i was looking to cats black cat try to pass the road , brown is wait it one of the car coming speedy and crash the black cat directly i look to brown cat it was looking sadly look to it`s friend when it start to leave the live the blood was start going out of cat`s body from it`s head it jump raondom and cry ,it`s body was vibating then it stop thear is o any move , on any sound the cat died the brown cat still stand and look it can not do any thing just it go and look close to it , to see if black cat still alive after it konw the black cat is died it go away to car`s parking and disappear under the cars
The End
If thear are any mistake in grammer or write tell me
Thanks Advance
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-- there are many mistakes. Here is your first sentence corrected: This is a true story. I saw it happen some months ago .
— Mister Micawber
-- there are many mistakes.
Here is your first sentence corrected: This is a true story.
I saw it happen some months ago .
First, you should review your composition and put it into a paragraph form instead of using a new line for each sentence.
Put a capital letter at the beginning of each sentence and a full stop (a period) at the end of each sentence.
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Interesting story, Hamooor, but-- oh dear!-- there are many mistakes. Here is your first sentence corrected:
This is a true story. I saw it happen some months ago. First, you should review your composition and put it into a paragraph form instead of using a new line for each sentence. Put a capital letter at the beginning of each sentence and a full stop (
You haven't tried to correct any of it yourself yet, Hamoor-- not even regarding the guidelines I gave you! No one is going to help such a lazy person.