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Mfarshada Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Cast under reprimand ....

Does this make any sense in English:

Cast under universal reprimand for the imminent stoning of a woman, this sanctimony sounds now ridiculously impudent.

Any better suggestions?

Thanks.
  

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Hi, Does this make any sense in English: Cast under universal reprimand for the imminent stoning of a woman, this sanctimony sounds now ridiculously impudent. Too many uncommon words strung together in a way that does not sound natural. Any better suggestions?

— Clive

  • Hi, Does this make any sense in English: Cast under universal reprimand for the imminent stoning of a woman, this sanctimony sounds now ridiculously impudent.
  • Too many uncommon words strung together in a way that does not sound natural.
  • Any better suggestions?
  • Perhaps this?
  • This universally condemned decision to stone a woman now seems extremely rash.
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Hi,

Does this make any sense in English:

Cast under universal reprimand for the imminent stoning of a woman, this sanctimony sounds now ridiculously impudent.

Too many uncommon words strung together in a way that does not sound natural.

Any better suggestions?

Perhaps this?

This universally condemned decision to stone a woman now seems extrem
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