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Lisak Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
Career Objective
Dear teachers,
What do you think of the grammar of this career objective? Thank you!
My work fields are culture and media. I am strongly interested in a career where I can apply the organizing aspects of information and communication technologies (ICT) in new ways and/or learn new applications and where my awareness on gender issues is valued. My career goals at the moment are tied to my recent move to the US, which I consider as a great opportunity to broaden my horizon.
What do you think of the grammar of this career objective? Thank you!
My work fields are culture and media. I am strongly interested in a career where I can apply the organizing aspects of information and communication technologies (ICT) in new ways and/or learn new applications and where my awareness on gender issues is valued. My career goals at the moment are tied to my recent move to the US, which I consider as a great opportunity to broaden my horizon.
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Hi Lisak, Welcome to the Forum. This seems fine to me. Just a couple of trivial suggestions.
- Hi Lisak, Welcome to the Forum.
- This seems fine to me.
- Just a couple of trivial suggestions.
- My work fields are culture and media.
- I am strongly interested in a career where I can apply the organizing aspects of information and communication technologies (ICT) in new ways and/or learn new applications , and where my awareness on gender issues is valued.
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Hi Lisak,
Welcome to the Forum. This seems fine to me. Just a couple of trivial suggestions.
My work fields are culture and media. I am strongly interested in a career where I can apply the organizing aspects of information and communication technologies (ICT) in new ways and/or learn new applications, and where my awareness on gender issues is val
Welcome to the Forum. This seems fine to me. Just a couple of trivial suggestions.
My work fields are culture and media. I am strongly interested in a career where I can apply the organizing aspects of information and communication technologies (ICT) in new ways and/or learn new applications, and where my awareness on gender issues is val
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