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Stevenukd Posted 19 years ago
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CARE FOR YA

0Dear Teachers,02br
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001. Although I'm dead because of hungry outside the streets, I also don't need you to care for me.02br
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002. You and I now are two different worlds and have different positons in society. You just forget me and find another good man for ya.02br
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00- Are these natural?02br
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00Thanks very much to Teachers,02br
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00 Stevenukd.0-
  

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0Hi Steven02br 02br 01font 001. Although I'm dead because of hungry outside the streets, I also don't need you to care for me. 02font 00I'm sorry, but I don't know what you are trying to say.

— BarbaraPA

  • 0Hi Steven02br 02br 01font 001.
  • Although I'm dead because of hungry outside the streets, I also don't need you to care for me.
  • 02font 00I'm sorry, but I don't know what you are trying to say.
  • You're dead?
  • 02br 02br 01font 002.
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0Hi Steven02br
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01font001. Although I'm dead because of hungry outside the streets, I also don't need you to care for me. 02font00I'm sorry, but I don't know what you are trying to say. You're dead? What are hungry streets?02br
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01font002. You and I now are 00in 00two 02f
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0 Not too good. Many errors. Perhaps:02br
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01i00 1. Although I'm 01b00dying of hunger out in the streets02b00, I 01b00don't need02b00 you to care for me.02br
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00 2. You and I now are 01b00of02b00 different worlds and have different 01b00positions02b0
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0 Can it be,02br
00"Even though I was dead of my hunger out in the streets, I wouldn't need you to care of me" ?0-
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0Hi,02br
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01font00Can it be,02br
00"Even though I was dead of my hunger out in the streets, I wouldn't need you to care of me" ?02font02br
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00Much better. I suggest 00"Even if I were dying of hunger out in the streets, I wouldn't need you to care of me." 02br
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00Don't say
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0 00Hi Clive02br
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00Much better. I suggest 00"Even if I were dying of hunger out in the streets, I wouldn't need you 01b00to care of me02b00."02br
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00Should '01b00to care of me'02b00 be '01b00to02b00 t01b00ake care of me'02b00 or '01b00to
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0 Thanks again Clive,02br
00Well, I was thinking in my language at that moment rather than English. 05002br
00Hope you're having a great day,010id1
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0Hi,02br
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01font00"Even if I were dying of hunger out in the streets, I wouldn't need you 01b00to care of me02b00."02font02br
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01font00Should '01b00to care of me'02b00 be '01b00to02b00 t01b00ake care of me'
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0 Another suggestion: ( The first sentence is about an imagination I think, but I couldn't make the proper tense to express the imagination. )02br
00Even if I would die of hunger out in the streets, I wouldn't need you to care of me.02br
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00And another question:02br
00I typed "my hunger" to stress the hunger that I am having. Well, of course I
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