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New2grammar Posted 18 years ago
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car rental

How to get a good deal on car rental in Bali.

From my experience, it's not wise to rent your transport online ahead of your travel as the rates are generally high. I know you would think that it's probably not worth risking your vacation to save a couple of bucks. But I can assure you the saving will be significant. Though I've never rented a car online, the rates on the internet seem much more expensive than what you get on the island.

Are there any mistakes?
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New2grammar Are there any mistakes? Nothing obvious. Here are a couple of style changes: In my experience, it's not the wisest thing to rent transport online before traveling as the rates are generally higher.

  • New2grammar Are there any mistakes?
  • Nothing obvious.
  • Here are a couple of style changes: In my experience, it's not the wisest thing to rent transport online before traveling as the rates are generally higher.
  • You might think it's not worth risking your vacation to save a couple of bucks, but I can assure you the saving will be significant.
  • Though I've never rented a car online, the internet rates seem much more expensive than those on the island.
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New2grammarAre there any mistakes?
Nothing obvious. Here are a couple of style changes:
In my experience, it's not the wisest thing to rent transport online before traveling as the rates are generally higher. You might think it's not worth risking your vacation to save a couple of bucks, but I can assure you the saving will be significant. Though I've neve
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HuevosThough I've never rented a car online, the internet rates seem much more expensive than those on the island.
Shouldn't it be 'rates seem much higher than those on the island'? (Rates are high or low, not expensive.or cheap.)

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