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Velectro Posted 19 years ago
Business & Finance

Car negotiations mail

Hi everybody,

please, can someone ceck this first negotiations mail?

Dear Ms. yyyyy,

With reference to the mail “Lease car - xxxxxx” of Dr. kkkkkkk, could you please send me the lease quotations of the following cars:

1 – Audi A4 Avant 2.0 TDI Multitronic 140 (CV), Diesel
2 – Passat Variant sport 2.0 TDI 140 ECG
3 – BMW 320

as described in the enclosed documents.
I don’t know the quotation in Germany of this car so I can’t determinate myself the lease rate, therefore I would be greateful for any piece of advice from Carlease about version/option in order to reach the right lease rate.

Finally I’d like to know if the Audi A4 Avant quotations will refer to the new version (in Italy will be distributed from september) or old version.

I look forward to hearing from you,

Your sincerely,

xxxxxxxxxx

Tanks in advance
  

Top answer

Dear Ms. yyyyy, With reference to the e-mail [ mail could be letter or e-mail ] “Lease car - ***” of Dr. 0 TDI 140 ECG 3 – BMW 320 as described in the enclosed documents .

— Feebs11

  • Dear Ms.
  • yyyyy, With reference to the e-mail [ mail could be letter or e-mail ] “Lease car - ***” of Dr.
  • 0 TDI 140 ECG 3 – BMW 320 as described in the enclosed documents .
  • [This implies a letter] I don’t know the quotation in Germany for these cars, so I can’t determine the lease rate .
  • Therefore I would be grateful for any piece of advice from Carlease about which version/option to go for in order to reach the right lease rate.
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Dear Ms. yyyyy,
With reference to the e-mail [ mail could be letter or e-mail ] “Lease car - ***” of Dr. kkkkkkk", could you please send me the lease quotations for the following cars:

1 – Audi A4 Avant 2.0 TDI Multitronic 140 (CV), Diesel
2 – Passat Variant sport 2.
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First, I want thank you.

I'm sending an e-mail, so do you think that "as described in the attached documents" would be better?

What does mean "which version/option to go for in order to reach"? I never met this construction.
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VelectroFirst, I want thank you.

I'm sending an e-mail, so do you think that "as described in the attached documents" would be better? Since you can't enclose documents with an e-mail, yes - attached is the word to use.

What does mean "which vers
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Clear, Thanks again. This correction are really useful for me.
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Dear Febs11,

I recived this reply at my mail:


Dear xxxxx,



Thank you for sending us your quotation request.



After reviewing your car configuration with the manufacturers possible configurations we noticed that e.g. for the VW Passat the options adaptive light, Durchladesystem, 12V Anschluss in Mittelarmlehne are not available.
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What they are asking you to do is re-submit for a quotation, using a valid car configuration [ie - you must be sure of what various options the manufacturers offer on the different models]. You should be able to access the manufacturers' sites in English.

So your next step is to say:

Dear Mr. yyyy,

I’m sorry for the mi
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thanks, this correction are really important in order to improve my writing skill.
I the near future I will try to write some essay. What do you think about? Have any other advice about the improving of writing skills?
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