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Ryotaro Posted 15 years ago
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Car accident

Some stupid car driver bumped into my car from behind while I was stopping at red light, but she arugued that the light was truning green. I was so disgusted. BTW, ambulance crew was spuper nice and cool, I was about to ask them to take a picture with them.

Can you please check the grammatical errors?

Thanks,

Ryo
  

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I have underlined some problem areas. Please fix them and post your revised text: Some stupid car driver bumped into my car from behind while I was stopping at red light, but she arugued that the light was truning green. I was so disgusted.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined some problem areas.
  • Please fix them and post your revised text: Some stupid car driver bumped into my car from behind while I was stopping at red light, but she arugued that the light was truning green.
  • I was so disgusted.
  • BTW , ambulance crew was spuper nice and cool , I was about to ask them to take a picture with them.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please fix them and post your revised text:

Some stupid car driver bumped into my car from behind while I was stopping at red light, but she arugued that the light was truning green. I was so disgusted. BTW, ambulance crew was spuper nice and cool, I was about to ask them to tak
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Hi Mister Micawber,

Some stupid car driver bumped into my car from behind while I stoped on the red light, but she insisted that the light was turuning to green. I was so disgusted. By the way, the ambulancescrew was super nice and cool. I was about to ask them taking a picture with them.

I did not get the part "nice and cool", so I left it as it was.

Thanks,
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Some stupid car driver bumped into my car from behind while I was stopped at a red light, but she argued that the light was turning green. I was so disgusted! By the way, the ambulance crew was very calm and helpful. I was about to ask them if I could take a picture with them.
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