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1. The moment I wake up in the morning my thoughts captures you and it continues until/tlll the time I go into a sound sleep in the night.

2. The moment have started when you continue to be in my mind until/till I go into a sound sleep next.

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1. The moment I wake up in the morning, you capture my thoughts and continue to hold them until/till I go to sleep at night. 2 .

— Mister Micawber

  • 1.
  • The moment I wake up in the morning, you capture my thoughts and continue to hold them until/till I go to sleep at night.
  • 2 .
  • (X) The moment have started when you continue to be in my mind until/till I go into a sound sleep next.
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1. The moment I wake up in the morning, you capture my thoughts and continue to hold them until/till I go to sleep at night.

2. (X) The moment have started when you continue to be in my mind until/till I go into a sound sleep next.
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