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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Hi is this caption grammatically correct?

An exclusive deal from Emirates flight. Thank you Emirates. And yeah finally, I bought this best-selling sleeping Mask now in jumbo size for $100 only. These two babies have been added in to my skin care routine. Excited to use it.

  

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The first two "sentences" are not complete sentences, but if you are writing a caption or blurb, that is okay. The sentences are grammatically correct, but the information isn't clear and the sentences aren't well written. I read about a mask, so I don't know what the "two babies" are.

  • The first two "sentences" are not complete sentences, but if you are writing a caption or blurb, that is okay.
  • The sentences are grammatically correct, but the information isn't clear and the sentences aren't well written.
  • I read about a mask, so I don't know what the "two babies" are.
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The first two "sentences" are not complete sentences, but if you are writing a caption or blurb, that is okay. The sentences are grammatically correct, but the information isn't clear and the sentences aren't well written. I read about a mask, so I don't know what the "two babies" are.

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I'm sorry, I called the products as "babies" :-(

I have edited a bit. Try this:

An exclusive deal from Emirates flight. Thank you, Emirates. And yeah finally, I bought this best-selling sleeping Mask now in jumbo size for $100 only. These products have been added in to my skin care routine and excited to use it.

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