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Antonija Posted 20 years ago
Vocabulary

captain of a ship

How should I phrase this expression?

The company XY offers the insight into the adventure of the captain of a ship by presenting Oblo, its latest sports watch.
  

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Perhaps: The company XY offers original insight into the adventures of a ship captain by presenting Oblo, its latest sports watch, designed with his spirit in mind.

— Marius Hancu

  • Perhaps: The company XY offers original insight into the adventures of a ship captain by presenting Oblo, its latest sports watch, designed with his spirit in mind.
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Perhaps:
The company XY offers original insight into the adventures of a ship captain by presenting Oblo, its latest sports watch, designed with his spirit in mind.
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It sounds ok. Thank you for your effort Marius.
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