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Guest Posted 22 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can't get it quite right...

I am having difficulty getting this sentence to come out right.. please HELP!

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Before Phoebe came into the story everything was described to be evil and dark, but when Holden eventually introduced her we saw a side of Holden's that we never even knew existed.
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Thank you in advance.
  

Top answer

' Catcher in the Rye , eh? Nice book.

  • ' Catcher in the Rye , eh?
  • Nice book.
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Pretty nearly, Guest:

'Before Phoebe comes into the story, everything is described as evil and dark; but when Holden eventually introduces her, we see a side to him that we did not know existed.'

Catcher in the Rye, eh? Nice book.

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