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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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cange the profession
hiiii every ones.....
pls help me ....i want to send a email to my boss for change my profession.letter draft is as below pls correct me.
dear sir,
kindly inform you,my family visa got rejected in two times because of my profession.so i'm in a critical situation.
pleae inform to mr. XXXX to cange my profession as soon as possibal.
Respectfully Yours,
pls help me ....i want to send a email to my boss for change my profession.letter draft is as below pls correct me.
dear sir,
kindly inform you,my family visa got rejected in two times because of my profession.so i'm in a critical situation.
pleae inform to mr. XXXX to cange my profession as soon as possibal.
Respectfully Yours,
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Hi Anon; I am surprised that you can change your profession without additional training or experience. You did not say what profession you want to have listed for your visa application, either. Anyway, here are some suggestions for your letter.
- Hi Anon; I am surprised that you can change your profession without additional training or experience.
- You did not say what profession you want to have listed for your visa application, either.
- Anyway, here are some suggestions for your letter.
- I highlighted some errors for you to fix.
- d ear s ir, I would like to inform you that my family visa was rejected in two times because of my profession, so i' m in a critical situation.
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Hi Anon;
I am surprised that you can change your profession without additional training or experience. You did not say what profession you want to have listed for your visa application, either. Anyway, here are some suggestions for your letter. I highlighted some errors for you to fix.
dear s
I am surprised that you can change your profession without additional training or experience. You did not say what profession you want to have listed for your visa application, either. Anyway, here are some suggestions for your letter. I highlighted some errors for you to fix.
dear s
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Dear Mr [surname],
My family visa application has been rejected twice because of my listed profession, so I am in a critical situation. Please ask Mr [surname] to change my profession as soon as possible.
Respectfully yours,
My family visa application has been rejected twice because of my listed profession, so I am in a critical situation. Please ask Mr [surname] to change my profession as soon as possible.
Respectfully yours,
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