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Kaos Posted 18 years ago
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Cane the Sweet

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00Need a quick help on this.02br
00In 1976, Tate and Lyle 01b00extended 02b00the idea of Cane and Sweet in sugar refining process in their article [# citation]. Their idea 01b00is 02b00based on chlorination process. The article 01b00claims 02b00the product has improved sweetness -- 600 times sweeter than ordinary sugar. Also, a table 01b00is02b00 given showing side-by-side comparison of sweetness with other sugar compounds.02br
00Are all the tenses correct? Thanks.02br
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02br 02br 00In 1976, Tate and Lyle 01b 00extended 02b 00the idea of Cane and Sweet in 01span 00the02span 00 sugar refining process in their article [# citation]. Their idea 01b 00is 02b 00based on 01span 00the/a02span 00 chlorination process. The article 01b 00claims 02b 00the product has improved sweetness -- 600 times sweeter than ordinary sugar.

  • 02br 02br 00In 1976, Tate and Lyle 01b 00extended 02b 00the idea of Cane and Sweet in 01span 00the02span 00 sugar refining process in their article [# citation].
  • Their idea 01b 00is 02b 00based on 01span 00the/a02span 00 chlorination process.
  • The article 01b 00claims 02b 00the product has improved sweetness -- 600 times sweeter than ordinary sugar.
  • 02br 00"sweetness -- 600 times" should be written without spaces around the dash, thus "sweetness--600 times"0-
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01cite10Kaos12cite10Are all the tenses correct?12blockquote
10Your tenses are correct but, if you don't mind, there are some other corrections needed.02br
02br
00In 1976, Tate and Lyle 01b00extended 02b00the idea of Cane and Sweet in 01span00the
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0Thank you for your reply and thanks for the corrections. 01blockquote
01cite10RayH12cite10I don't know what "chlorination process" is so I can't say whether you should use "the" or "a" but you need one of them.12br
10"sweetness -- 600 times" should be written without spaces around the dash, thus "sweetness--600 times"12br
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