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Dwi bayu Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

can you tell me whether my writing has grammar error? can you please correct it? thanks

This afternoon is going to rain. It seems the sun covered by a big cloud is going to be swallowed. hahaha.

Hi everyone, It's nice to share a thing even it is not really important to be shared ( what a nice greeting!! -_- ). I'd like to tell you what I have just done lately. hehe. It's 03.30 p.m here. I have spent my precious 3 hours to cook some "RISOLES". I don't know why I am so interested to cook it. I think Cooking is my hobby and then I have a talent in it. What do you think guys? hahahaha

"Cooking is at once child's play and adult joy. And cooking done with care is an act of love" Craig Claiborne.
So RIGHT NOW Go to your kitchen and start to cook what you want to cook!! LOL
  

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This afternoon it is going to rain. It seems the sun , covered by a big clou d , is going to be swallowed. hahaha.

— AlpheccaStars

  • This afternoon it is going to rain.
  • It seems the sun , covered by a big clou d , is going to be swallowed.
  • hahaha.
  • Hi everyone, It's nice to share some thing even it is not really important to be shared ( what a nice greeting!!
  • -_- ).
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This afternoon it is going to rain. It seems the sun, covered by a big cloud, is going to be swallowed. hahaha.

Hi everyone, It's nice to share something even it is not really important to be shared ( what a nice greeting!! -_- ). I'd like to tell you what I have just done lately. hehe. It's 03.30 p.m here. I have spent my precious 3 hours to cook so
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Thank you very much. Emotion: embarrassed I will put it on my blog. I am afraid It will be worst when I can not realise that my writing is ungr
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