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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Can you spot any mistakes in these?
Can you spot any mistakes in either of these paragraphs. I have made up the names of the company and the newsletters. DLE Updates is just one of the company's quarterly publications.
Welcome to the first edition of DLE News, the monthly, sister e-bulletin to DLE Ltd's quarterly e-newsletter DLE Updates. Through DLE News, we will deliver to you brief, timely updates on the work we are currently undertaking, projects in our pipeline and our forthcoming events.
Welcome to the first edition of DLE News, the monthly sister to DLE Ltd's quarterly e-newsletter DLE Updates. Via DLE News, we will deliver to you brief, timely updates on the work we are currently undertaking, projects in our pipeline and our forthcoming events.
Welcome to the first edition of DLE News, the monthly, sister e-bulletin to DLE Ltd's quarterly e-newsletter DLE Updates. Through DLE News, we will deliver to you brief, timely updates on the work we are currently undertaking, projects in our pipeline and our forthcoming events.
Welcome to the first edition of DLE News, the monthly sister to DLE Ltd's quarterly e-newsletter DLE Updates. Via DLE News, we will deliver to you brief, timely updates on the work we are currently undertaking, projects in our pipeline and our forthcoming events.
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The first paragraph is better. The second is less natural.
- The first paragraph is better.
- The second is less natural.
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