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Inchoateknowledge Posted 20 years ago
Grammar
Can you spot any mistakes in my sentence?
By increasing the frequency of representatives' visits -- whether they be of local or remote companies' ones -- would not only be conducive to a more adequate career counselling service, but it would also promote (the) recruitment of College alumni.
Is the use of 'the' optional before 'recruitment' -- I think so?
Is the use of 'the' optional before 'recruitment' -- I think so?
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Don't think you need "By" in the beginning.
- Don't think you need "By" in the beginning.
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Hi,
By increasing the frequency of representatives' visits -- whether they be of local or remote companies' ones -- would not only be conducive to a more adequate career counselling service, but it would also promote (the) recruitment of College alumni.
Is the use of 'the' optional before 'recruitment' -- I think so? Yes.
By increasing the frequency of representatives' visits -- whether they be of local or remote companies' ones -- would not only be conducive to a more adequate career counselling service, but it would also promote (the) recruitment of College alumni.
Is the use of 'the' optional before 'recruitment' -- I think so? Yes.
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Thank you, Clive.
Increasing the frequency of representatives' visits, either from local or remote companies, would result in a more adequate career counselling service and large-scale recruitment of College alumni. OK?
Increasing the frequency of representatives' visits, either from local or remote companies, would result in a more adequate career counselling service and large-scale recruitment of College alumni. OK?
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Hi,
By increasing the frequency of representatives' visits -- whether they be of local or remote companies' ones -- would not only be conducive to a more adequate career counselling service, but it would also promote (the) recruitment of College alumni.
Increasing the frequency of representatives' visits, either from local or
By increasing the frequency of representatives' visits -- whether they be of local or remote companies' ones -- would not only be conducive to a more adequate career counselling service, but it would also promote (the) recruitment of College alumni.
Increasing the frequency of representatives' visits, either from local or
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