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Humblerick Whiskman Posted 7 years ago
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Can you spot any errors on this writing?

Can you spot any errors on this writing? If so, correct them.

It is 6 o'clock and it is still dark. I don't want to wake up but I have to or I'll late for school, so I waked up, took a shower. I have to be down for breakfast at 6:30 since my school is far from home and I have to be there before 7:30. I finished breakfast, catched a bus. During the bus I was bored so I decided to whip out my 3DS and play some games. Suddenly, while I was whipping out my 3DS It fell out of my hand. (or slipped out of my hand?) Worse yet, it's dead. I can't turn it on. I've got nothing to do just to wait until the bus arrived.

  

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To begin with, you have to decide whether you are writing in the historical PRESENT TENSE (see plain bold below) or in the PAST TENSE (see bold italic below). You can use either one, but you have to use the same one throughout. After you make the needed tense changes, resubmit your revision to the forum.

  • To begin with, you have to decide whether you are writing in the historical PRESENT TENSE (see plain bold below) or in the PAST TENSE (see bold italic below).
  • You can use either one, but you have to use the same one throughout.
  • After you make the needed tense changes, resubmit your revision to the forum.
  • It is 6 o'clock and it is still dark.
  • I don't want to wake up but I have to or I'll late for school, so I waked up , took a shower.
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To begin with, you have to decide whether you are writing in the historical PRESENT TENSE (see plain bold below) or in the PAST TENSE (see bold italic below). You can use either one, but you have to use the same one throughout. After you make the needed tense changes, resubmit your revision to the forum.

It is 6 o'clock and it is still dark. I don't want to wake up b

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