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Oanh Pham Posted 9 years ago
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Can you show me the mistakes, please? The chart below shows information about subway systems in three major European cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisions

The graph provides comparable information about the different subway systems in three cities in term of total track length, the number of operate stations and the number of passengers each day.

Overall, it is clear that London underground has the longest track,while there are the highest number of stations in operation in Paris Metro and everyday the number of passengers who use Moscow Metro which is highest.

According to the information, it is showed that London underground has the total track length which is 408 km, it is twice than Paris Metro 's track length ( 214km). In comparision, Moscow Metro's track length is 300km both underground and on the surface and its the number of operate atations is 182. This figure for Paris Metro is 300 and for London underground is 275.

It is obvious that althought London underground has the longest track, its the number of daily passengers is lowest, accounting for 3 million people. In comparision, there are 4.5 million passengers and 6.5 million passengers who use Paris Metro and Moscow Metro everyday, respectively.

  

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The graph provides comparable information about the different subway systems in three cities in term of total track length, the number of operate stations and the number of passengers each day. Overall, it is clear that (missing word) London underground has the longest trac k,w hile there are the highest number of stations in operation in Paris Metro and everyday the number of passengers who use Moscow Metro which is highest. According to the information, it is showed that (missing word) London underground has the total track length which is of 408 k m, it is twice than Paris Metr o 's track length ( 214km).

  • The graph provides comparable information about the different subway systems in three cities in term of total track length, the number of operate stations and the number of passengers each day.
  • Overall, it is clear that (missing word) London underground has the longest trac k,w hile there are the highest number of stations in operation in Paris Metro and everyday the number of passengers who use Moscow Metro which is highest.
  • According to the information, it is showed that (missing word) London underground has the total track length which is of 408 k m, it is twice than Paris Metr o 's track length ( 214km).
  • In comparision , Moscow Metro's track length is 300km both underground and on the surface and its the number of operate atations is 182.
  • This figure for Paris Metro is 300 and for (missing word) London underground is 275.
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The graph provides comparable information about the different subway systems in three cities in term of total track length, the number of operate stations and the number of passengers each day.

Overall, it is clear that (missing word) London underground has the longest trac

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