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Danil Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Can you show me my mistakes, please?

I have watched this video.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=np0hEWsuYpE

And I wrote, what I am thinking about::

The man had found the bullet with 45 mm kaliber. This kaliber from the gun who one on the west. The one of the most legendary people from Deadwood was Wild Bill Hickos. He had loved the gambles, and once upon a time he had shot the human in the bar.

Are the many mistakes in my text?
Kind Regards!
  

Top answer

The man found a 45-caliber bullet casing. It is from a Colt 45, one of the guns that won the west. One of the most legendary people from Deadwood was Wild Bill Hickock .

— Mister Micawber

  • The man found a 45-caliber bullet casing.
  • It is from a Colt 45, one of the guns that won the west.
  • One of the most legendary people from Deadwood was Wild Bill Hickock .
  • He loved to gamble, and he was shot while gambling in a bar.
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The man found a 45-caliber bullet casing. It is from a Colt 45, one of the guns that won the west. One of the most legendary people from Deadwood was Wild Bill Hickock. He loved to gamble, and he was shot while gambling in a bar.
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Can we say: "the man had found?" or this is wrong? I know that write in Past Simple? But if we write in past perfect? Is this will be right?
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DanilCan we say: "the man had found?" or this is wrong?
That is wrong because he found it during the video, not before the video was made.
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Mister MicawberThat is wrong because he found it during the video,
Then we should use: past simple.

Dear, Mister Macwaber, thank you! I wiil try to remember it.
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