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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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Can you rewrite the sentence for the better?

0I have a sentence below for you to make it better if you feel up to it.02br
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01i00Sunday was a nice day.02i0-
  

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0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00Sunday was a nice day. 02br 02br 00'Nice' is a weak and trite adjective that we say a lot but often try to avoid writing. How about 'pleasant'?

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00Sunday was a nice day.
  • 02br 02br 00'Nice' is a weak and trite adjective that we say a lot but often try to avoid writing.
  • How about 'pleasant'?
  • The syllable 'day' is repeated here, which is undesirable.
  • 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-
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0Hi,02br
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01font00Sunday was a nice day. 02font00Well, you could say 01font00Sunday was a nice day because I fell in love and won $10,000,000.02font00 But perhaps you just want to work with these words and this simple kind of structure?02br
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00'Nice' is a weak and
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0 Thanks a million, Mr. Clive. Very pleasingly done. 0-
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0Hi,02br
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00You're welcome.02br
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00Please don't call me Mr. Clive, just Clive is fine in N. American culture.02br
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00Best wishes again, Clive0-
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