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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Can you rewrite the sentence?

Can you rewrite the sentence? There are too many when but I don't know how to get rid of them. I don't know if I've used the correct words to describe the situation. I'm not sure of 'flying red ashes'.

When you roll a cigarette and you don't pack it well, when you flick it, you sometimes get flying red ashes. That went into my eye and burnt it.

Thank you!!!
  

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There's a technique when rolling your own: it has to be packed pretty tight, otherwise when you flick the ashes you can get a cloud of red-hot sparks that can fly into your eyes.

  • There's a technique when rolling your own: it has to be packed pretty tight, otherwise when you flick the ashes you can get a cloud of red-hot sparks that can fly into your eyes.
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There's a technique when rolling your own: it has to be packed pretty tight, otherwise when you flick the ashes you can get a cloud of red-hot sparks that can fly into your eyes.

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