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Blue Moon Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

Can you review this and tell me if any mistakes??



The Brain


The Brain is the most powerful organ in your body. It controls your every though and every move. Your brain controls your every move and emotion. Without your brain you would be like a dummy without feelings or thoughts or anything.

Different parts of the brain are responsible for differnet mental functions. Your Brain controls how you learn, your emotions, and perception.

If part of your brain was to get damaged then the part that is destroyed won't work as properly.The way you use to think and act and learn in that part of your brain would get destroyed and you would forget everything you use to do, say and think.

I was wondering if you can tell me if i made any mistmakes. I just need some final comments and stuff!!! Be honset please! This was supposed to be small and it was to be only a 100 words or more, and i did over 100 Emotion: smile

  

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The Brain The brain is the most powerful organ in your body. It controls your every thought, every move, and every emotion. Without your brain you would be like a manikin--without feelings, thoughts or movement.

  • The Brain The brain is the most powerful organ in your body.
  • It controls your every thought, every move, and every emotion.
  • Without your brain you would be like a manikin--without feelings, thoughts or movement.
  • Different parts of the brain are responsible for different mental and physical functions.
  • Your brain controls learning, emotions, and perceptions.
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The Brain


The brain is the most powerful organ in your body. It controls your every thought, every move, and every emotion. Without your brain you would be like a manikin--without feelings, thoughts or movement.

Different parts of the brain are responsible for different mental and physical functions. Your brain controls learning, emotions, and perceptions.
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Thank-you very much!

You put alot more mature and better words in my Essay! I really appreciate it. Manikin is better then dummy, lol.
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a nice essay .i have to say that.. i have no word to complain about your essay..keep studying english, you will become a person who is good at english like a native america

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