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Arma Mukada Posted 14 years ago

Can you review my little "riddle"?

It's a little bit weird and there are many doggerel verses, so I hope someone could correct me. Emotion: smile

There is one person you could know
There might be two
You can't drift on doubt's floe
Like you always do

The person you know already
Is at your fingertips
But you mentioned it barely
With smile on your lips

Second one is hard enough
To find in this mist
Battle will be a bit tough
But it's of fun gist*

*is this even admissible?
  

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But it's of fun gist* No - "And fun is in its gist" is funky but acceptable. I don't know what concept you are attempting to express.

  • But it's of fun gist* No - "And fun is in its gist" is funky but acceptable.
  • I don't know what concept you are attempting to express.
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But it's of fun gist*

No - "And fun is in its gist" is funky but acceptable. I don't know what concept you are attempting to express.
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Oh, thank you! Well, I did it for my "frenemy" to trick him/her (I'm not sure of its gender) into thinking that there are two persons - at least that's what I wanted to do.

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