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Leecarlton Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Can you review my grammar?
Hi all,
This is for a company website. I would love some input on grammar before we put it up. Thanks so much!
As Bookkeeper, Paul takes full responsibility for monitoring all daily financial transactions by coordinating meetings and discussions with all departments. He anticipates Trinity Global School's needs for each country and adapts to changing situations through his understanding of domestic and international financial practices.
Paul is a member of the Association of Accountants and Professionals, the Association of Certified Fraud Examiners and the Institute for Professionals in Taxation. He received his bachelor's degree in Accountancy from Georgia State University in Atlanta, Georgia. After graduating Paul worked in a tax preparation firm for one year before moving to New York City. Here Paul began work in the accounting department of an insurance litigation law firm. Upon finding that this working environment clashed with his preferred hands-on and pragmatic approach, Paul began freelancing for both profit and nonprofit companies. His commitment to the latter led him to his current role at Trinity Global School.
Paul has developed strong relationships with his local community organizations and societies for the disabled; volunteer work that he describes as putting an endless smile on his face.
When not attempting to stay current on industry occurrences and standards, Paul enjoys non-digital photography, sketching/painting on various canvases, taking in indie concerts, and outdoor exploration.
This is for a company website. I would love some input on grammar before we put it up. Thanks so much!
As Bookkeeper, Paul takes full responsibility for monitoring all daily financial transactions by coordinating meetings and discussions with all departments. He anticipates Trinity Global School's needs for each country and adapts to changing situations through his understanding of domestic and international financial practices.
Paul is a member of the Association of Accountants and Professionals, the Association of Certified Fraud Examiners and the Institute for Professionals in Taxation. He received his bachelor's degree in Accountancy from Georgia State University in Atlanta, Georgia. After graduating Paul worked in a tax preparation firm for one year before moving to New York City. Here Paul began work in the accounting department of an insurance litigation law firm. Upon finding that this working environment clashed with his preferred hands-on and pragmatic approach, Paul began freelancing for both profit and nonprofit companies. His commitment to the latter led him to his current role at Trinity Global School.
Paul has developed strong relationships with his local community organizations and societies for the disabled; volunteer work that he describes as putting an endless smile on his face.
When not attempting to stay current on industry occurrences and standards, Paul enjoys non-digital photography, sketching/painting on various canvases, taking in indie concerts, and outdoor exploration.
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A bookkeeper is a relatively low-level position. Otherwise, I have suggested only a few cosmetic changes: As Accountant, Paul takes full responsibility for monitoring all daily financial transactions by coordinating meetings and discussions with all departments. He anticipates Trinity Global School's needs for each country and adapts to changing situations through his understanding of domestic and international financial practices.
- A bookkeeper is a relatively low-level position.
- Otherwise, I have suggested only a few cosmetic changes: As Accountant, Paul takes full responsibility for monitoring all daily financial transactions by coordinating meetings and discussions with all departments.
- He anticipates Trinity Global School's needs for each country and adapts to changing situations through his understanding of domestic and international financial practices.
- Paul is a member of the Association of Accountants and Professionals, the Association of Certified Fraud Examiners and the Institute for Professionals in Taxation.
- He received his bachelor's degree in Accountancy from Georgia State University in Atlanta, Georgia.
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A bookkeeper is a relatively low-level position. Otherwise, I have suggested only a few cosmetic changes:
As Accountant, Paul takes full responsibility for monitoring all daily financial transactions by coordinating meetings and discussions with all departments. He anticipates Trinity Global School's needs for each country and adapts to changing situations through his unders
As Accountant, Paul takes full responsibility for monitoring all daily financial transactions by coordinating meetings and discussions with all departments. He anticipates Trinity Global School's needs for each country and adapts to changing situations through his unders
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