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I want to ask what will blizzard do about achievements? Now, achievement points are ineffective and we can get only some flag parts from achieving. This case makes achievements are so useless and no-one cares about flag's accents&shapes etc. But I think achievements are more important than this. If you analyze last games in the industry, all game companies started to put achievements in games at short notice and this situation makes achievements are required because it makes games more playable and extend the end-game time. After this, achievements started to be similar but some samples has changed it. How? Make them like bonuses in game! This was really important because in this way people can go out of linear play also can get bonuses in their profile.

Now, stand alone achievements are less playable. Shapes & accents are nice bonuses but still gamers see them as not cool bonuses. What should blizzard do? They must make samething as paragon 2.0. Character bonuses!!!

For example:

Every 100 achv. points give you 1% MF 1% GF
Do you think every people just go farming and bored from game? Make achievement extra mf and gf then you will see many people try to kill diablo in naked

----Every category completes give you extra bonuses

Hardcore category gives you 100vitality 100main stat
Yes, Every people just will start a new HC char. Be sure!

Crafting category gives you %5 price rate drop in blacksmith/jewelcraft/enhancement
Crafting is lowball now but after RoS I think this will be great buff.

----Classes category gives you:
I think this makes every people go 5(6in RoS) class in 60. But blizzard must pick bonuses wisely. If they give 100str for barbar bonus (as drops 100str on staff , everyone put it back). WDs dont care it but if you give +100vit everyone wants a barbar. So u must pick bonuses for general use

Barb +100vit
Monk + 5 dodge chance
Wizard
DH + 5 attack speed
WD + 50 All res

etc.

I gives some example, they dont need to be, they can change. But this is more important than paragon 2.0 I think so. Because paragon is same as leveling, you will just farm and It sometimes make game boring but this made game more playable. This is my thought. What you think?