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Jooooon Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

can you point out something wrong

" this day makes tiring me out.
I had to bear with my immediate supervisor's grumble all day along, and I even couldn't go to P.X because the atmosphere is too depressed to tell him that I've got to go there.
I've had to put it off over and over again
I'm getting exhausted by him"

any advice would be appreciated.
  

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This day has tired me out; the atmosphere at work is depressing. As usual, I had to put up with my supervisor's grumbling all day long. I wanted to go to the PX, but I couldn't, because I was afraid to ask him if I could go.

  • This day has tired me out; the atmosphere at work is depressing.
  • As usual, I had to put up with my supervisor's grumbling all day long.
  • I wanted to go to the PX, but I couldn't, because I was afraid to ask him if I could go.
  • I haven't been able to go to the PX for days; I keep putting it off, because I'm afraid to ask my boss if I can go, and I need to go.
  • I'm getting exhausted dealing with him.
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This day has tired me out; the atmosphere at work is depressing. As usual, I had to put up with my supervisor's grumbling all day long. I wanted to go to the PX, but I couldn't, because I was afraid to ask him if I could go. I haven't been able to go to the PX for days; I keep putting it off, because I'm afraid to ask my boss if I can go, and I need to go. I'm getting exhausted dealing with hi

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