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Alhanouft Posted 9 years ago
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Can you pls help me on these paragraph

The Peas Color

If i have to chose color for my business i will chose green color to be specific light green . If you ask me way i chose it ? i actually like black color but for business i will say green. because it is have a good meaning in our culture and it is trendy also it is make you feel relax .sometime it is mean natural and healthy . so maybe it is will be a good thing for my business .

  

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First, you can fix some simple things yourself. Your spacing and capitalisation is a horrible mess. The word "I" is always capitalised.

  • First, you can fix some simple things yourself.
  • Your spacing and capitalisation is a horrible mess.
  • The word "I" is always capitalised.
  • Every sentence must begin with a capital letter.
  • There should be a space after a full stop and no space before.
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First, you can fix some simple things yourself. Your spacing and capitalisation is a horrible mess. The word "I" is always capitalised. Every sentence must begin with a capital letter. There should be a space after a full stop and no space before. There should be no space before a question mark.

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