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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Can you pls correct me with this sentence

According to my commitment to job and obeyness the management as well as experience and sincerity.
  

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It is not a complete sentence, and it is very hard to understand, but you probably need not mention either experience or sincerity, since they are expected basics. Please try again.

  • It is not a complete sentence, and it is very hard to understand, but you probably need not mention either experience or sincerity, since they are expected basics.
  • Please try again.
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It is not a complete sentence, and it is very hard to understand, but you probably need not mention either experience or sincerity, since they are expected basics. Please try again.

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