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Pratik Jajal Posted 11 years ago
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Can you please verify my article?

Hello Sir,

Can you please verify my article as I wish to improve my English:

Article:

Sir Jagadish Chandra Bose, he was the Indian Scientist. He has made the world aware about "Plans too have feelings", was born in Memansingh. His father's name is Bhagvan Chandra Bose, he was a deputy magistrate at Faridapur District. He was forced by family for studying in Calcutta at St. Xaviar School. In this school, prominent person's sons and daughters were studying. They were embarrassing him too much, but Jagadish was taking them easily. It was a time when Jagadish became angry and fought with an officer's son. After that, everyone was treating him with respect.

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Pratik
  

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Hello Pratik,
Welcome to EnglishForward. Thank you for registering.

Sir Jagadish Chandra Bose , he was an Indian scientist. He has made the world aware that "Plans too have feelings". He was born in Memansingh.
A verb needs one subject. Don't put two subjects, or no subject.

His father's name is Bhagvan Chandra Bose. H
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Hello Mr. Pratik Jajal,
the word "Memansingh" should be "Mymensingh" and "Faridapur" should be "Faridpur" .
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Hello Sir,

Thanks for your expeditious response and indicating my mistakes.

I will keep this mistakes in my mind so that I can improve my English.

Once again thanks.

Regards,
Pratik
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Mohiyul Islam Hello Mr. Pratik Jajal,the word "Memansingh" should be "Mymensingh" and "Faridapur" should be "Faridpur" .
Thank you, Mohiyul.

I do not know Indian geography, obviously.
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