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Alc24 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Can you please tell me how to write this correctly?

Could you please help me make these sentences grammatical?

My coffee machine is broken. It uses up all the water and coffee (beans) you put in it regardless of the amount. You could put a little bit of water and a whole lot of beans, it'll use up all of it to make something that's just undrinkable. The machine doesn't dose the water and bean to make some good coffee, instead it uses up all the coffee (beans) and dilutes it with water water is available whether there is a lot of water or not.

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I have underlined problem areas: My coffee machine is broken. It uses up all the water and coffee (beans) you put in it regardless of the amount. You could put a little bit of water and a whole lot of beans, it'll use up all of it to make something that's just undrinkable.

  • I have underlined problem areas: My coffee machine is broken.
  • It uses up all the water and coffee (beans) you put in it regardless of the amount.
  • You could put a little bit of water and a whole lot of beans, it'll use up all of it to make something that's just undrinkable.
  • ) with water water is available whether there is a lot of water or not.
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I have underlined problem areas:

My coffee machine is broken. It uses up all the water and coffee (beans) you put in it regardless of the amount. You could put a little bit of water and a whole lot of beans, it'll use up all of it to make something that's just undrinkable. The machine doesn't dose the water and bean to make some good coffee, i
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I tried , but it's not natural;

Could you please rewrite it so that it sound natural and correct?

My coffee machine is broken. It uses up all the water and coffee (beans) you put in it regardless of the amount. You could put a little bit of water and a whole lot of beans. It'll use up all of it to make something that's just undrinkable. The machine doesn't dose the water a
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My coffee machine is broken. It uses up all the water and coffee (beans) you put in it regardless of the amount. You could put a little bit of water and a whole lot of beans, and it'll use up all of them to make something that's just undrinkable. The machine doesn't control the water and beans to make good coffee. Instead it uses up all the coffee (beans) and dilutes them wit

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