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Smart Girl 6725 Posted 13 years ago
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Can you please revise this sentence
I believe the arts galleries and museums shouldn't be free, like people should pay to go in, to appreciate the heritage and artistic creation by paying to see it and to grow tourist economy and to increase jobs in the tourist industry.
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I think the sentence is a little too long. Keep the first sentence short, this is your main idea. Then in the second sentence you can explain why you believe this.
- I think the sentence is a little too long.
- Keep the first sentence short, this is your main idea.
- Then in the second sentence you can explain why you believe this.
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I think the sentence is a little too long. Keep the first sentence short, this is your main idea. Then in the second sentence you can explain why you believe this.
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