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Smart Girl 6725 Posted 14 years ago
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Can you please revise this sentence?
Most people in strict societies are adapted enough to enjoy what they have. It's not realistic and intelligent to restrict the ways of fun into going to nightclubs and pubs or expansion mixed gender places.
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Most citizens in strict societies enjoy what they have. It is not realistic or intelligent to restrict entertainment to nightclub s, pubs and other mixed-gender places. and frankly, I don't quite understand your argument.
- Most citizens in strict societies enjoy what they have.
- It is not realistic or intelligent to restrict entertainment to nightclub s, pubs and other mixed-gender places.
- and frankly, I don't quite understand your argument.
- I have deleted what I think is unnecessary verbiage.
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Most citizens in strict societies enjoy what they have. It is not realistic or intelligent to restrict entertainment to nightclubs, pubs and other mixed-gender places.
I don't know what you mean by 'expansion'...and frankly, I don't quite understand your argument. I have deleted what I think is unnecessary verbiage.
I don't know what you mean by 'expansion'...and frankly, I don't quite understand your argument. I have deleted what I think is unnecessary verbiage.
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Thank you! I was just trying to write some other points of view.
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