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Smart Girl 6725 Posted 14 years ago
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Can you please revise this sentence?

The way teenagers live their life in the past is so different from teenagers' life nowadays. It was family-centered which are hardly there any good old-fashioned families in America nowadays.
  

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Smart Girl 6725 The way teenagers live d their li ves in the past is so different from teenagers' li ves nowadays. It was family-centered which are hardly there any good old-fashioned families in America nowadays. Try to correct the second sentence yourself, to make it correctly relate to the first sentence.

— Canadian45

  • Smart Girl 6725 The way teenagers live d their li ves in the past is so different from teenagers' li ves nowadays.
  • It was family-centered which are hardly there any good old-fashioned families in America nowadays.
  • Try to correct the second sentence yourself, to make it correctly relate to the first sentence.
  • We can guess what what "It" refers to, but the sentence is not good.
  • Also, the part after 'centered' is not good.
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Smart Girl 6725The way teenagers lived their lives in the past is so different from teenagers' lives nowadays.

It was family-centered which are hardly there any good old-fashioned families in America nowadays.
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The way teenagers lived their lives in the past is so different from the way they live nowadays. It was family-centered whereas there are hardly any good old-fashioned families today.

What about this attempt?
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Smart Girl 6725What about this attempt? much better
In the past, life was family centered, but there are hardly any good old-fashioned families today.
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