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0 Topic: Some people avoid confrontations at all costs, while other people seem to seek them out. Discuss each type of person. Then indicate which type of person you are and why. 02br
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00In one society that we life, I believe that we will be faced with confrontations. It can appear in many situations such as at home among families, at street between police and driver, at office between employee and employer, etc. Some people will try to avoid all kinds of confrontation but another like to create confrontation to show their power. 02br
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00There are several advantages and disadvantages to face with confrontation. Some of disadvantages are the confrontation will spend our time and our money. How much we must spend our time and money? It depend how long we try to make confrontation with another. It can be in short time but several cases did in years. In addition, the confrontation also can destroy our friendship and our family. Usually if one side feels negative in confrontation, they will close the relation with people who make them loss. 02br
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00However, sometimes we must to make confrontations with another doing bad to us. For instance, we need to against the robber, faker, liar, and thief because they did it just for their benefit. They do not care their job will hurt not only one or two persons but also will hurt their own community. It is very bad situation if our community is stamped as a bad by another community. With this situation, we must brave to make confrontation event if we must die to do it, because I believe in justice. 02br
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00According to advances and disadvantages confrontations, I fell we had better avoid all the confrontations because I believe the confrontation without the good solution will hurt another side. Event we feel we win in this confrontation, I believe in another time, they will make refund to us. 0-