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Nicherin Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Can you please point out grammar errors and sentence construction errors in this mail
Dear ABC,
How are you? Hopes the things are well there.
The reason to write this mail is to inform you that currently I am working in XYZ organization at Powai & we have a opening for the post of " Electrical Engineer" in our organization ( Project & Maintenance Dept.).
‘XYZ' is a multinational organization having offices in all Metro cities all over India. It dealts in Rating & Advisory Business. ‘XYZ' is a fast growing organization & had a very good future. It has a very good reputation in Market.
Following are the key benefits if you join the organization.
• Huge scope for the personal Growth: - The corporate office (where the opening is ) constructed with High tech Technologies & " state of the Art facilities. There is a huge scope to improve your knowledge& to use your expertise, skill to prove yourself.
• Good pay scale : - The organization has very good pay scale which will help you to improve financially.
• Work Experience with ‘XYZ' :- Working Experience in ‘XYZ' will help you in future Role in another organization.
Considering above said key benefits a s well as your knowledge, past experience, I will strongly recommed you to join our organization.
How are you? Hopes the things are well there.
The reason to write this mail is to inform you that currently I am working in XYZ organization at Powai & we have a opening for the post of " Electrical Engineer" in our organization ( Project & Maintenance Dept.).
‘XYZ' is a multinational organization having offices in all Metro cities all over India. It dealts in Rating & Advisory Business. ‘XYZ' is a fast growing organization & had a very good future. It has a very good reputation in Market.
Following are the key benefits if you join the organization.
• Huge scope for the personal Growth: - The corporate office (where the opening is ) constructed with High tech Technologies & " state of the Art facilities. There is a huge scope to improve your knowledge& to use your expertise, skill to prove yourself.
• Good pay scale : - The organization has very good pay scale which will help you to improve financially.
• Work Experience with ‘XYZ' :- Working Experience in ‘XYZ' will help you in future Role in another organization.
Considering above said key benefits a s well as your knowledge, past experience, I will strongly recommed you to join our organization.
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Nicherin It dealts in Rating & Advisory Business I think it's better if you say that: "it deals with every problem in terms of Rating and adivsory business". Nicherin XYZ' is a fast growing organization & had a very good future ... fast-developing organization and has good prospect.
- Nicherin It dealts in Rating & Advisory Business I think it's better if you say that: "it deals with every problem in terms of Rating and adivsory business".
- Nicherin XYZ' is a fast growing organization & had a very good future ...
- fast-developing organization and has good prospect.
- Nicherin Following are the key benefits if you join the organization.
- add List following....
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Nicherin It dealts in Rating & Advisory BusinessI think it's better if you say that: "it deals with every problem in terms of Rating and adivsory business".
NicherinXYZ' is a fast growing organization & had a very good future... fast-developing organization and has good prospect.
NicherinFollowing
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Thanks for your reply. is the document free of grammatical errors ?
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if you have changed my words and style thats absolutely fine.. That was the purpose of posting it on the site, to get a few opinions on the correctness of this text. Can you point out a few grammar errors or is it grammatically sound?
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