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Mateusz Basiak Posted 10 years ago
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Can you please check and note my writing, any advices will be appreciated !!!
Kamila is a very open person. From the interview I gathered that one of the most important things in her life is music. She takes delight in listening to music, especially when it is a live music. She is an amateur musician herslef, she enjoys playing on the guitar.
What was interesting, during the interview she told me a lot about her relationship with family, I found it really cute. Nowadays this kind of relation is rare, particularly in this age. What makes Kamila a very special person is her open mind and rare sense of humour. She is really outgoing and she is very into meeting new people, into making new friends. I was shocked when she mentioned that clubbing is not her thing. What was also unexpected, she admitted that she revels in going to school and learning.
She made a great impression on me because she is well-organised and aware of her strengths and weaknesses. She seems to be a very mature person.
Kamila is a very open person. From the interview I gathered that one of the most important things in her life is music. She takes delight in listening to music, especially when it is a live music. She is an amateur musician herslef, she enjoys playing on the guitar.
What was interesting, during the interview she told me a lot about her relationship with family, I found it really cute. Nowadays this kind of relation is rare, particularly in this age. What makes Kamila a very special person is her open mind and rare sense of humour. She is really outgoing and she is very into meeting new people, into making new friends. I was shocked when she mentioned that clubbing is not her thing. What was also unexpected, she admitted that she revels in going to school and learning.
She made a great impression on me because she is well-organised and aware of her strengths and weaknesses. She seems to be a very mature person.
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Mateusz Basiak Can you please check and note my writing , a ny advices will be appreciated !!! Advice is non-count. We don't use the plural form.
- Mateusz Basiak Can you please check and note my writing , a ny advices will be appreciated !!!
- Advice is non-count.
- We don't use the plural form.
- You have a run-on sentence, and you have some run-on sentences in your writing.
- You need to study run-on sentences and how to avoid them.
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Mateusz BasiakCan you please check and note my writing, any advices will be appreciated !!!Advice is non-count. We don't use the plural form.
You have a run-on sentence, and you have some run-on sentences in your writing. You need to study run-on sentences and ho
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clubbing- the activity of going to nightclubs, especially to dance to popularmusic, drink, and socialize:
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Mateusz Basiak Can you please check and comment onKamila is a very open person. From the interview, I gathered that one of the most important things in her life is music. She takes delight in listening to music, especially when it is linotemy writing? Any advices willwould be appreciated.
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Mateusz Basiakclubbing- the activity of going to nightclubs, especially to dance to popularmusic, drink, and socialize:That is an informal definition of the verb "club." If you are writing a formal essay, it's best to avoid informal word usage.
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is this sentence ok?
On the contrary to what most of the students would say, she admitted that she revels in going to school and learning.
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On the contrary to what most of the students would say, she admitted that she revels in going to school and learning.
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Mateusz BasiakIs this sentenceokokay/OK?
Mateusz BasiakOn the contrary to what most of theUnlike many other students,would say, she admittedKamila said that sherevels inshe really enjoys going to school and learning.
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