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Average Joe Posted 7 years ago
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I was born in Kior but raised in Uil. We are 6 siblings; one brother, who is the only son of our parent, me and my 4 sisters. My childhood was not boring like today's children's life. As a child who was born in the war and had no toys, I often played with the war's remained like; burned houses, tanks and the remained of missils. Anyhow, it was interesting for me. When I became seven years old, I could go to shool. I was so passionate to go to school, but I wasn't enthusiastic much more. One of my best strength was to be very good in drawing and pitching in school's soical activities. After graduating, I went to university and continoued my lessons in law field. It was completly different than my school's term. Then I was a hard working student and won the top student tittle at all, because I studied my favorite field. Two years ago, I could graduated from Law faculty with flying color. Next year I won a best internship that was useful for me. I worked in General Attorney for eight months. It has been seven months that I got married. Now I am trying to prepare myself to take the TOEFL test and get a good score, in order to win a full scholarship for getting my master degree.
  

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I was born in Kior but raised in Uil. ) I have one brother, who is the only son of our parent, me and my 4 sisters. My childhood was not boring like many children's today.

  • I was born in Kior but raised in Uil.
  • ) I have one brother, who is the only son of our parent, me and my 4 sisters.
  • My childhood was not boring like many children's today.
  • today's children's life .
  • As a child who was born in the war and had no toys, I often played on the remnants of war with the war's remained like; burned -out houses, wrecked tanks and the remained of missils .
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I was born in Kior but raised in Uil. (In what country are these places?) We are 6 siblings; (I come from a large family.) I have one brother, who is the only son of our parent, me and my 4 sisters. My childhood was not boring like many children's today.

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