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A recent survey has indicated that the number of junior secondary students who smoke has

been soaring over the past few years.

Write an article entitled``Teenage Smoking''for your school magazine explaining why more and more teenagers smoke nowadays and suggesting ways to reduce teenage smoking.

Hard and Soft tactics to reduce teenage smoking

As a proverb to say"Smoking can always lead to a habit",the habit is compulsory to be hailed by the ways of both education and legislation.Why should we pay such prohibitive costs to ensure the health of youngsters?According to a research,more and more teenagers smoke nowadays because the tobacco companies have kept prompoting their products.In addition,teenagers' are mentally and physically immature hence various ways will be recommended to reduce teenage smoking.

Tobacco companies are selfish rather than generor.Their appealing advertistment has been advertised a wrong idea for teenagers in an indirect way.It is believed that the younger generation are the independent groups.Those stubborn and rebilious perferences are commonly commenced on their minds.Consistenly,neither education nor legistnation isn't implemented.Is it possible to ban the smoking in public?

To rectify the depressing phenomena,education and legislation have to implement immediately.

Apart from the talks and seminar,more efforts should be done.Not only the childerns is needed to be educate but also their parents is necessary to be tutored about how to educate the childerns at home.

For another policy,the restriction of price setting and brand names are always be immune to the rise on smoking's fashion.

As regards such education provided by schools,the survey makes us realise the seriousness in smoking.Starting on today,our government and international organization must contribute more on banning smoking in an diplomatic way.So that our next generation need not face the same issues.

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