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Topic :

All over the world , mental illness is a topic that is rarely talked about and, when it is , the discussion is usually marked by prejudice and distaste.

Write an article explaining why many people discriminate against the mentally ill and suggesting ways to improve the situation.

Mentall illness - Less Fear More Compassion

Johnny Ton,a youngster suffered from panic disorders,are depressing anytime and anywhere.Can our society's organization input more resources to the group of mentally illness?"They aren't lazy or evil."True,it is a tremendous pressure that brings you some problems such as sound pollution.Nonetheless,it is believed that we are used to standardize a person.Consequently,we have been misconcepted that they are a germ that will infect ourselves.Why do we asribe that?

To begin with,the mass media is to blame.Mass media ranging from television,newspapers,magazine,radios to films and even advertisments indoctrinate the general public with misconceptions about mental disorders.Newspaper and magazine characterize the mental illness like a devil,while they aren't definitely realize what the illness is.Regrettably,they will never acknowledges their cons of immoral behaviour.

All of the aforementioned reason has showed that not only the shortage of society's response but also the indirect way in delievering the wrong message by the mass media.Hence,what corresponding methods can be adopted to address the tragedy?

For a start , there is no doubt that people's attitude be changed if proper education is needed.Body language and eye contact is a proper way to constitute the good impression for them.These messages should be conveied to all students in school.Moreover,the government should advertise the embarracing difficulties to our citicizens what knowledges they have to spring to mind.

It is high time we show our endeavours and compassion to our society.So the next time l write an article for the mental illness,what l should put for the answer to the phenomena.It is hoped to say"l am unprecedentedly tolerant the lighten story."

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