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The demolition of the Star Ferry Pier has sparked off public indignation and aroused the public's concern for heritage conservation.
Write an article to discuss the significance of protecting the history and express your own opinion.Give your article a title.
Different forms of development
HongKong,a top-ranked metropolis hailed as city of life,is well known for it prosperity and affluence.It cannot be denied that the success is based on our consmopolitan lifestyle,social stability and economic growth.As Hong Kong citiziens,we might fell proud of our city's urban development;yet there is no lack of reason for us to be humble,one of which is the SAR government's negligence on the importance of perserving our culture and history.
Challenging the 1997 economic crisis and the SARS infection problem,multifaceted stuffs was washed through the drills but only not the heritage.What is the advantages of conservation bring to the urban development?One point we can emphasize is the devotion to the buildings.
Indeniably,being a diverse development metropolis,we should consider to keep growing on different aspects,for example,the living areas,the financial and industrial spaces and the institutional facilities. It must be the most considerable and significant for the government policy in the 21st century.Apart from global warming and the finanical tsunami,the least polluted places will attract myriads of tourists or even immigrant to live in.Those are definitely relevant to the consumption bugget.
All of the above analysis are based on the all-rounded policy.Every swords has two sides.A precious management is believed to obtain more agreement and favourite.Not only the technological progress is significant in the new century but also the peaceful and all-rounded consideration which was burned entirely.
Can you please help me to proofread and conclude my mistakes?
L will greatly thank for your help.
Looking forward to reply you any covenience.
The demolition of the Star Ferry Pier has sparked off public indignation and aroused the public's concern for heritage conservation.
Write an article to discuss the significance of protecting the history and express your own opinion.Give your article a title.
Different forms of development
HongKong,a top-ranked metropolis hailed as city of life,is well known for it prosperity and affluence.It cannot be denied that the success is based on our consmopolitan lifestyle,social stability and economic growth.As Hong Kong citiziens,we might fell proud of our city's urban development;yet there is no lack of reason for us to be humble,one of which is the SAR government's negligence on the importance of perserving our culture and history.
Challenging the 1997 economic crisis and the SARS infection problem,multifaceted stuffs was washed through the drills but only not the heritage.What is the advantages of conservation bring to the urban development?One point we can emphasize is the devotion to the buildings.
Indeniably,being a diverse development metropolis,we should consider to keep growing on different aspects,for example,the living areas,the financial and industrial spaces and the institutional facilities. It must be the most considerable and significant for the government policy in the 21st century.Apart from global warming and the finanical tsunami,the least polluted places will attract myriads of tourists or even immigrant to live in.Those are definitely relevant to the consumption bugget.
All of the above analysis are based on the all-rounded policy.Every swords has two sides.A precious management is believed to obtain more agreement and favourite.Not only the technological progress is significant in the new century but also the peaceful and all-rounded consideration which was burned entirely.
Can you please help me to proofread and conclude my mistakes?
L will greatly thank for your help.
Looking forward to reply you any covenience.
Top answer
Is this for CE or UE? I highlighted things that your marker is most likely to ding you for. I also don't understand your arguments.
- Is this for CE or UE?
- I highlighted things that your marker is most likely to ding you for.
- I also don't understand your arguments.
- What do they have to do with historical preservation?
- As Hong Kong citiziens,we might fell proud of our city's urban development; yet there is no lack of reason for us to be humble, (does not make sense) one of which is the SAR government's negligence on the importance of perserving our culture and history.
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Is this for CE or UE?
I highlighted things that your marker is most likely to ding you for.
I also don't understand your arguments. What do they have to do with historical preservation?
Different forms of development
HongKong,a top-ranked metropolis hailed as city of life,is well known for it prosperity and affluence.It cannot be den
I highlighted things that your marker is most likely to ding you for.
I also don't understand your arguments. What do they have to do with historical preservation?
Different forms of development
HongKong,a top-ranked metropolis hailed as city of life,is well known for it prosperity and affluence.It cannot be den
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This is well-done for your caring rectify to my article.
Yes.This is for UE.However,l have written a under-standard passage that is disastisfactory.
Fortunately,you helped me a lot.
Apart from the grammatical mistakes and the elaboration or oganization, l think l should improve more and more.
L like english.HAHA! Thank you
Yes.This is for UE.However,l have written a under-standard passage that is disastisfactory.
Fortunately,you helped me a lot.
Apart from the grammatical mistakes and the elaboration or oganization, l think l should improve more and more.
L like english.HAHA! Thank you
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