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Antonia Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can you please help me to choose better version?

Hello!

Is it better to say:

We constantly coordinate demands and interests with our surroundings and in that way we actually conduct negotiations, often without being aware that we are doing so.

or

We constantly coordinate demands and interests with our surroundings and in that way we actually conduct negotiations, often without awareness of doing so.

If you have time and energy for other comments, please do so. Thank you
  

Top answer

] demands and interests with our surroundings.

  • ] demands and interests with our surroundings.
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This change might help, Antonia:

We often conduct negotiations without being aware that we are constantly coordinating [our?] demands and interests with our surroundings.

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