Can you please help me correct and make my motivational letter a better one. Thank you!Dear University of ###### I am applying for the medical programme at the University of ### for quite a lot of reasons. I have always been interested in human...

Dear University of ######I am applying for the medical programme at the University of ### for quite a lot of reasons. I have always been interested in human science at a young age. This has set my own investigation of the human body which turned into a benefiting review. That being stated, I personally am an adventurous individual, who likes to tour, or in this case, live in a different environment which will help me build up my level of education.
The University of ##### is one of the best-talked #### in ###. As a matter of fact, almost half of the country's doctors had graduated from this university. In addition to that, the reputation and the cultural life that prevails there are highly honored and a lot of local doctors highly recommend the University of ###.

One of the biggest reasons, aside from being attracted to the #### culture and language is the education it offers to its students. An extra or perhaps a "plus" critical reason for applying for this University and its program is the international environment it features and the number of international students from all over the world. I believe studying with so many inspiring, talented and enthusiastic students from around the globe can genuinely teach me and motivate me to face the world. Hence, obtaining a degree from the University of ### would actually prepare and teach me the appropriate preparation and the functional skills required advanced knowledge compelled in this changing world. In a matter of fact, I am sure that this specific university of my dream would give me the opportunity to receive knowledge from this chosen field which I need in the future.Learning new languages has never been an issue in my case. I have been learning new languages throughout my whole life. In fact, I have learned two languages before the age of 6. Since then, my eagerness to learn more languages has been it's best. As a matter of fact, I can speak fluently the amount of four languages. Of course, learning fifth language would only improve and sharpen my cerebrum and desire to learn as many languages as I can. This will definitely prepare me to face my future of interactions with individuals from different backgrounds. Nonetheless, I cannot wait to learn the language of###.Dear University of ######I am applying for the medical programme at the University of ### for quite a lot of reasons. I have always been interested in human science at a young age. This has set my own investigation of the human body which turned into a benefiting review. That being stated, I personally am an adventurous individual, who likes to tour, or in this case, live in a different environment which will help me build up my level of education.
The University of ##### is one of the best-talked #### in ###. As a matter of fact, almost half of the country's doctors had graduated from this university. In addition to that, the reputation and the cultural life that prevails there are highly honored and a lot of various doctors highly recommend the University of ###.

One of the biggest reasons, aside from being attracted to the #### culture and language is the education it offers to its students. An extra or perhaps a "plus" critical reason for applying for this University and its program is the international environment it features and the number of international students from all over the world. I believe studying with so many inspiring, talented and enthusiastic students from around the globe can genuinely teach me and motivate me to face the world. Hence, obtaining a degree from the University of ### would actually prepare and teach me the appropriate preparation and the functional skills required advanced knowledge compelled in this changing world. In a matter of fact, I am sure that this specific university of my dream would give me the opportunity to receive knowledge from this chosen field which I need in the future.Learning new languages has never been an issue in my case. I have been learning new languages throughout my whole life. In fact, I have learned two languages before the age of 6. Since then, my eagerness to learn more languages has been it's best. As a matter of fact, I can speak fluently the amount of four languages. Of course, learning fifth language would only improve and sharpen my cerebrum and desire to learn as many languages as I can. This will definitely prepare me to face my future of interactions with individuals from different backgrounds. Nonetheless, I cannot wait to learn the language of###.
The people who know me best say that I am a very relaxed, work very well under pressure and clearheaded person. No matter what kind of a circumstance I'm in, I tend to be very rational and find a solution because everything has its own way of solving it. To me, difficult situations only teach me to work harder in order to succeed. Without challenges and hardships, we wouldn't value the aftermath of that situation. In conclusion, medicine will be hard, but if given the opportunity to study it, I will do my very best to make every challenge into an opportunity.
I am very aware of the competitive nature associated in this field and added to that the amount of stress it brings to the table. This doesn't scare me at all and it actually motivates me to do my best while striving for the best every second chance I get. Despite this, I will work hard to accomplish my dreams.I went into a very multicultural high school where associating with different people was a continues cycle. This taught me to be more open-minded and to get along with anyone despite their backgrounds. After finishing school, I went to work with elementary school kids. I was assigned to work alongside the special education teacher and kids with limitations. It turned out to be a hard job, but I never even once thought about leaving or perhaps working somewhere else. Being under so much pressure and trying to find solutions every time taught me a lot. One of the biggest things I learned was to be patient, steadfastness, perform it the best way possible and of course to make a purpose out of it in order to fully see the outcome.Biology was one of the favorite subjects of mine. I have taken 5 biology courses which the minimum was 2 and the maximum was 6 courses. Chemistry, on the other hand, was a fun subject. I took 3 out of 5 maximum courses and the minimum course was only one. My chemistry courses consisted of molecular, reaction/energy concentration and human environmental chemistry. The minimum amount of physics courses offered was one out of 9 maximum courses. I have only taken the mandatory course.
I am willing to travel outside of my homeland to pursue an education but not to travel very far away. This gives the opportunity to study in a near neighboring country. Firstly, I would love to get a grasp of the culture and its people to a much deeper level. This can be achieved by joining different types of local activities or being part of a club that would give me a spectacle chance to have a bound with the local citizens. If I get the chance to study in ### for the next six years, I'm sure of overcoming any difficulties.After completing my medical studies I will continue into residency to specialize in becoming a pediatrician. Working with little children has always been one of my greatest abilities. Combining science and my skills with working kids can be one of my biggest traits in the future. This dream of becoming a pediatrician only got stronger while working as a teacher assistant. Being interested in pediatric diseases for the longest have set my goal to help kids and learn more about it. This will only be possible if be this golden opportunity by the University of ###. With that being said, I cannot wait to become a member of this amazing team of hard-working students and professional personnel. I hope to present my skills and efforts to the university and become a worthy student of this University.Yours respectfully,
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