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Ilma Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can you please give your opinion about my poem?

Day after day
I see my self run Run from live
Run from death

Time after time
I feel my self's feeling
Feel the sadness
Feel the happiness

Year by year
Minute by minute
Second by second

Times goes by
And I lost my self away..
  

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Hi, Day after day I see my self run Run from life Run from death Time after time I feel my self's feeling Feel the sadness Feel the happiness Year by year Minute by minute Second by second Times goes by And I lost my self away.. I like it. Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, Day after day I see my self run Run from life Run from death Time after time I feel my self's feeling Feel the sadness Feel the happiness Year by year Minute by minute Second by second Times goes by And I lost my self away..
  • I like it.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Day after day
I see my self run
Run from life
Run from death

Time after time
I feel my self's feeling
Feel the sadness
Feel the happiness

Year by year
Minute by minute
Second by second

Times goes by
And I lost my self away..

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