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The graph shows information about the number of marriages in the UK from 1951 to 2001.
The line graph compares the number of all marriages, first marriages, and remarriages in the United Kingdom over half a century starting in 1951.
Overall, total marriages and first marriages showed a downward trend despite some initial variations, while for second-time-around marriages, it rose marginally in the last decade.
In the year 1951, there was approximately 400,000 weddings took place in the UK, around which it plateaued before going up to a high of 450,000 in 1971. This number decline significantly by roughly 80,000 for the rest of the time span. Meanwhile, starting at slightly under 350,000, the number couples married for the first time showed a negligible increase of about 10,000 during the first 20 years, followed by a substantial fall to 200,000 in 2001.
With respect to remarriages, they were comparatively unconventional, with merely 150,000 individuals married twice or more times in 1951. This number remained constant over the next four decades before climbing progressively to 200,000 cases in the final year.
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This graph is quite defective. You should not use this for practice. Do you know why? Where did you find it? Do not use sources that have bad practice essays.
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