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The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.

The three pie charts plot the global household expenditure, consumption of resources, and the distribution of world population. Five named categories of spending, including food, clothing, housing, transport, and miscellaneous are shown.

Overall, the share devoted to all unclassified categories in different countries is the largest. While Asia is the most populous continent in the world, natural resources are utilized mostly in the USA and Europe.

In detail, food and transport compose the second and third areas of most expenses, at nearly a quarter and a fifth separately. When added together, those show a contribution of 42%, slightly higher than the most significant category – miscellaneous household items. The remaining 18% of the budget is divided over housing and clothing, with a ratio of two to one, in that order.

With respect to the global population, the highest proportion is recorded in Asia, at well over a half (57%). Europe and America account for more than a quarter (14% each), compared to merely less than 10% of Africa and other continents, separately. By contrast, the USA and Europe are dominant consumers of natural resources, making up 60% of the total amount in the world.